An Uncompromising Cinema House at NCU (2.4)

Nowadays, people seldom go to theaters unless they want to see 3D movies for greater visual and audio effects. But will anyone go there for art movies? Their survival is more difficult than commercial movies let alone the self-supporting cinemas showing mostly art movies. 

107 cinema house in National Central University is just this kind of theater. Has 107 ever thought of changing its position as an art cinema house? ‘‘No!’’ the manager of 107, Su Yee Hsiao, firmly answered.

Figure 1. Volunteers of 107 and  the manager is at the right side of this picture.

        ‘‘Sometimes I may refer to audience favor when choosing movies, but I really want to show art movies shot by great directors such as Koreeda Hirokazu,’’ Hsiao added, ‘‘Even though these movies are not blockbusters, they are definitely worth watching!’’

107 craves to be an cinema house not just in NCU. ‘‘In May 25^th to 26^th , 107 will hold a great Sundance Film Festival which is famous in American independent films. Because several renowned directors and mass media will attend the activity, it will be an excellent chance to let more people in Taoyuan recognize 107,’’ the manager remarked.

107 is an uncompromising cinema house which continuously provides a place for art movies addicts; meanwhile, endeavors to bring more people unfamiliar with art movies inside. Let’s see how 107 touches everyone by its great art movies!

An Uncompromising Art Cinema For Everyone (2.3)

Nowadays, people seldom go to theaters unless they want to see 3D movies for greater visual and audio effects. But will anyone go there for art movies? Their survival is more difficult than commercial movies let alone the self-supporting cinemas showing mostly art movies.

107 art cinema in National Central University is just this kind of theater. Has 107 ever thought of changing its position as an art cinema? ‘‘No!’’ the manager of 107, Su Yee Hsiao, firmly answered.

       ‘‘Sometimes I may refer to audience favor when choosing movies, but I really want to show art movies shot by great directors such as Koreeda Hirokazu,’’ Hsiao added, ‘‘Even these movies are not a blockbuster, they are definitely worth watching!’’

107 craves to be an art cinema not just in NCU. ‘‘In May 25^th to 26^th , 107 will hold a great Sundance Film Festival which is famous in American filmdom. Because several renowned directors and mass media will attend the activity, it will be an excellent chance to let more people in Taoyuan recognize 107,’’ the manager remarked.
           107 is an uncompromising cinema which continuously provides a place for art movies addicts; meanwhile, endeavors to bring more people unfamiliar with art movies inside. Let’s see how 107 touches everyone by its great art movies!

Response to Peer Feedback (news 2)

1.‘‘107 is an uncompromising cinema continuously providing a place for art movies addicts; meanwhile, endeavoring to bring more people unfamiliar with art movies inside.’’ 

    One of our group member suggested that using attract or draw would be better.

→ Actually, I prefer to use bring given that I want to emphasize the action of people who are unfamiliar with art movies entering 107 cinema from his or her previous position, a distinction between mainstream and art movies.

2.‘‘107 is an uncompromising cinema continuously providing a place for art movies addicts; meanwhile, endeavoring to bring more people unfamiliar with art movies inside.’’ 

The grammar of this sentence is not correct. It needs comma or to add ‘‘which’’.

→ I agree with this advice. I will add ‘‘which’’.

3.In the first paragraph, I don’t have to tell readers about people watching movies online nowadays.

I can just say art movie theaters are more difficult than commercial ones for running.

→ I agree and I should try my best to make my news conciser. Because my point is introducing 107 art cinema so I don’t need to talk about people watching movies online nowadays.

An Uncompromising Art Cinema For Everyone (2.2)

Nowadays, people can see movies online or rent DVDs instead of going to theaters unless they want to see 3D movies for greater visual and audio effects. But will anyone go there for art movies? Their survival is more difficult than commercial movies let alone the self-supporting cinemas showing mostly art movies.

107 art cinema in National Central University is just this kind of theater. Has 107 ever thought of changing its position as an art cinema? ‘‘No!’’ the manager of 107, Su Yee Hsiao, firmly answered.

       ‘‘Sometimes I may refer to audience favor when choosing movies, but I really want to show art movies shot by great directors such as Koreeda Hirokazu,’’ Hsiao added, ‘‘Even these movies are not a blockbuster, they are definitely worth watching!’’

107 craves to be an art cinema not just in NCU. ‘‘In May 25^th to 26^th , 107 will hold a great Sundance Film Festival which is famous in American independent films. Because several renowned directors and mass media will attend the activity, it will be an excellent chance to let more people in Taoyuan recognize 107,’’ the manager remarked.

107 is an uncompromising cinema continuously providing a place for art movies addicts; meanwhile, endeavoring to bring more people unfamiliar with art movies inside. Let’s see how 107 touches everyone by its great art movies!

An Uncompromising Art Cinema For Everyone

Nowadays, people choose to see movies online or rent DVDs instead of going to theaters unless they want to see 3D movies for greater visual and audio effects. But will anyone go there for art movies? Their survival is more difficult than commercial movies let alone the self-supporting cinemas showing mostly art movies.

107 art cinema in National Central University is just this kind of theater. Has 107 ever thought of changing the position as an art cinema? ‘‘No!’’ the manager of 107, Su Yee Hsiao, firmly answered.

          ‘‘Sometimes I may refer to audience favor when choosing movies, but I really want to show art movies shot by great directors such as Koreeda Hirokazu. Even these movies are not a blockbuster, they are definitely worth watching!’’ Hsiao added.

107 craves to be an art cinema not just in NCU. ‘‘In May 25^th to 26^th , 107 will hold a great Sundance Film Festival which is famous in American independent films. Because several renowned directors and mass media will attend the activity, it will be an excellent chance to let more people in Taoyuan recognize 107,’’ the manager remarked.

107 is an uncompromising cinema continuously providing a place for art movies addicts; meanwhile, endeavoring to bring more people unfamiliar with art movies inside. Let’s see how 107 touches everyone by its great art movies!